Wednesday, March 20, 2013

It's All The Same Comments

Rating: 5.0

The worst part is, I can't stop this.
We wonder why no one can get along.
They hate our friendship because it's strange,
because it's different, because it's not the same.
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Julie McLeod
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Julianna Mcleod 17 June 2013

Thank you for that. I agree :) It does look abit confusing lol

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C.ann Penning 17 June 2013

Great write with lots of emotion. :) I would suggest breaking your longer poems up into stanzas, it's an easier read for the reader and use less punctuation, it's just not as necessary in poetry. Great job though :)

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