Friday, March 15, 2013

It's All Over For Now Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the world outside begins to crumble
The cold water rises as you begin to stumble
And your hands begin to numb and begin to fumble
Lose your place on the page
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Liam Hughes
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Michael Walker 26 March 2018

Fine alternation of verse and chorus, like a song or ballad.

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Wonderfully worded work my friend!

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Liam Hughes

Liam Hughes

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