Sunday, November 23, 2014

It's All Fare In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a corner close to windows,
A rose bud in the dark shadows,
Something she is writing,
And the shoulders exciting,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 November 2014

Nice metaphor while comparing her to a rose bud and love glowing like sunshine in the dark shadows.......... very well composed.......10/10

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Amitava Sur 27 November 2014

A lovely description of her love and longing where everything is so fit and fine ! !

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Hazel Durham 25 November 2014

Her desires are inflamed with such longing her heart is an imprint left on the page she is writing to her beloved! Beautiful write!

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Valsa George 24 November 2014

The comparison of her to a rose bud in dark shadows near the window is beautiful! When in love, everything will look ravishing and delectable! What does she write.. I wonder! A letter pouring all her love into it......? Enjoyed!

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 November 2014

A lovely description of courtship...............10

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Ramesh Rai 24 November 2014

It is all fair in love and war. A love seeking an enlightenment is of course like the thirsty fiancé with an art of drought! Nicely penned.

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Salini Nair 24 November 2014

Nature is reflecting all in the glass of naught, To the thirsty fiancé with an art of draught! .....................beautiful poem....

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