In a corner close to windows,
A rose bud in the dark shadows,
Something she is writing,
And the shoulders exciting,
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A lovely description of her love and longing where everything is so fit and fine ! !
Her desires are inflamed with such longing her heart is an imprint left on the page she is writing to her beloved! Beautiful write!
The comparison of her to a rose bud in dark shadows near the window is beautiful! When in love, everything will look ravishing and delectable! What does she write.. I wonder! A letter pouring all her love into it......? Enjoyed!
It is all fair in love and war. A love seeking an enlightenment is of course like the thirsty fiancé with an art of drought! Nicely penned.
Nature is reflecting all in the glass of naught, To the thirsty fiancé with an art of draught! .....................beautiful poem....
Nice metaphor while comparing her to a rose bud and love glowing like sunshine in the dark shadows.......... very well composed.......10/10