It’s All About Balance Comments

One slight breeze could knock this poem of ballance but you have harnessed it well within its brilliance, Love duncan

Rich this poem is very metaphorical, ironically the word 'Whine' is probably the center of the poem. It's about a very unstable woman, who whines continuously. Joyce

Hello Joyce, I like the image, but your use of 'whine, ' if intentional, destroys the sympathy that we might otherwise have for the subject of your poem. The rest of the imagery works well for me.