Friday, November 15, 2013

It's A Trap! Comments

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come here, please come here
won't you save me from my despair?
come here i promise to always be near
please whisper sweet nothings in my ear.
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lucinda nightsilver
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 21 May 2014

Hello Lucinda. That was a very clever twist on an old Proverbs. Your did it very well, you are wise, I enjoyed this piece. Loyd

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