It's A Rainy Rainy Day Comments

I am in Islamabad and it's cloudy day here, I am feeling as my sentiments have been so beautifully painted by the poetess. When a reader starts seeing him in a poem, it means the poem is really close to a human heart, and it has been written by a great poet.

Nice flow of thought and ideas. However, it can be more effective, if you can make it a bit concise. Thanks!

Black clouds Covering Shining sun After summers Wrath of heat. Clouds we expect To rain heavily And to flourish or life with neo buds Good narration