Tuesday, November 24, 2015

It's A Poem On You Comments

Rating: 5.0

When silky words slip from your eyes,
to deep very deep inner of your heart.
When lines rearrange their shape and color,
and start resembling your curved eye brows.
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Hazel Durham 24 November 2015

A fascinating write with stunning imagery and is so original!

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Kelly Kurt 24 November 2015

Many ways to interpret this. I liked the first line where words escape from eyes. Nicely written

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M Asim Nehal 24 November 2015

Amusing....You have mentioned the small and big signs of poem on beloved.....I liked it.....How about friends and poets?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2015

Very deep and inner emotion flows in this marvelous work that talks about beat of heart in vision of eyes and beauty and this activate the dormant volcano. Amazing imagery is drawn here with nice presentation. Excellent...10

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