It's A Midsummer Dreamscape Comments
Buzz of the merry bees
And the song of bamboo trees.
In the ceramic pond carps swim.
Native grasses whisper something
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Surreal certainly. And I agree with Linda. The last line is perfect. Kind regards, Sandra
Dream or not, there are rumblings of discontent going on here. Few words, yet much is said between the lines. I especially love the last line - perfect! Linda :)
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10/6/2025 3:58:36 AM # 1.0.0
The reader feels the pain behind the irony. Class is such a constant and unfair fact of life in our sad and sorry world. Your beautiful description of nature in the first four lines makes the perfect backdropp for the meat of the poem. I could read a hundred poems and always recognize yours, Nimal. Such is your originality. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥