It's A Hard Road Comments

I jumped on the train I left this old town I escaped the rain I'm no longer down The wheels start to turn My worries are gone I have lots to learn About the trail that I'm on - -A great poem.Yes, life a journey to new destinations.

I forgot to rate this poem. I give it a ten because I like the minimalist style you use.

Nice poem. Great sentiments it expresses. It's quite uplifting and well said. No unnecessary words; right to the point you go. You know the road is hard but seem to feel sure the trip for adventure and learning will be worth it. Great attitude!

I like your natural writing style. I get the encouraged feeling by reading the poem.You travel like a wind, riding on your free soul. A wonderful poem. I just want to find the road that is best. A good write. Me too, always want to find such a road.

Great poem of Profound reality, keep writing.

Hi Liam, I love the travel/journey theme, it's a great subject for poems and this one has the extra quality that it would make a good song lyric, exceptional work my friend :)

I felt your excitement at the adventure ahead of you with the train's wheels in motion and your heart and thoughts racing with new places, new ideas to a great adventure of the unknown! Great write!

Amazing poem this one. It flowed well great message as well. Thanks for sharing