Wednesday, September 12, 2012

It's A Curse Comments

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In a corner I sit alone
Rocking on my haggard chair
Worn out walls with protruding stones
Gleaming dust scuttling in the air
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Sridatta Gupta
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Jazib Kamalvi 13 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Sridatta. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Poetheart Morgan 13 September 2012

First, thanks for the beautiful poppies and symbols, second, your poem is awesome.

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Indranil Bhaduri 12 September 2012

Crude reality expressed..awesome..

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Dead Leaf 12 September 2012

Loneliness is a curse Old age is even worse I once again want to bask under the warmth of my youth I want to shun this life's harsh truth your pain is clear in these lines....

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