It's a cold morning
Please heaven, let the rain fall!
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beautiful poetic expression by figuring the heaven as living being
you are GREEK All know it but I love to read and hear what you speak maybe for me 'tis still GREEK POET KL
Three short clever lines that depict utter sadness. Rain are graces from the One Above. It ceases.the loneliness and showers everlasting happiness. Another superb haiku.
All of heaven's rain will never equal the tears you may shed when sadness grips your heart as you wait and wait and wait.
Will the rain, wash your sadness away? I love your poetry. It is like Impressionism, putting together, form, color and feeling to express in a very compact way, what you want to say but that conquers the reader in a most unusual, deep and original way.
Sadly, lovely. I suppose some tears of pain Will be mixed in with the rain. Could not resist commenting, again.