It’s A Camel Ride Comments

Superb write and the torment after realisation well expounded... The lines are emotionally drenched with the tears of regret. Thanks for sharing.

Hi - dear Rafiq, I'm sorry to respond lately to your invitation. It's alovly emotional write where you spoke from deep inside your heart. A beautiful story telling what I thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

Mind-blowing imagery. A lover's guilt and regret expressed with such beauty of language that i'm completely blown away. Mature writing by a gifted poet.10

Oh this poem is like that music which comes from very far as if from heaven or from a distant land.The tune touches you deep within.You want to listen more of it.Without knowing its meaning or understanding its language you want to get absorbed.I read it, reread it several times and overwhelmed by its sheer beauty.It speaks of like lonely journey, promises made to one; s own creative self that has remained unfulfilled, symbolized by the worn out leather reins, the poet wants that spark to cross the threshold. Wondering for more words- to say on this poem- - - -I congratulate the poet for such an excellent poem.

heart breaking poem. leaving the reader to his/her imagination. will they meet? will she take him back? will he find her? both left alone in their own word, pining for each other. very sad to read.

what a beautiful poem! it touched me with the storm of the passion of the heart, the sorrows and lonliness. The shadows of the a lonely man, the camel, the emptiness of the town, all, are so vivid. reading your poem I feel it's so close to my heart the sadness and desperateness of one's journey in life. Thanks Rafig Sandeelvi for sharing a beautiful poem. Nhat Thuy Vi

A beautiful, but very sad poem. An unfilled promise and a lost love. I was hoping for a happy ending, but alas, like too often in real life, only loss.

Sublime writing, imagery and emotion.

Wonderful execution. And beautiful imagery.

With lines of such beauty and splendour, I was riveted with this spellbinding tale! !

What a beautiful poem. I quite enjoyed it.

No comment of mine can be better than the poem you have written. Well done and thanks for sharing BB

A heart-wrenching account of regret and deep sorrow-a deep symbolic poem!

your writing subliminal dear poet. enjoyed the read. keep it up!

awesome. extremely gripping.keep up the good work.

Powerful story told with great imagery and woven with such regret and tenderness! great write!

i have no words to describe your work. Sublime! please never stop writing.....

Thank you for inviting me to read your work, nicely woven story.

superb write...rich and allusive

What a beautiful poem, full of imagery and very crafted. A poem written from the heart, Has a sense of another world. I enjoyed it!