Tuesday, March 15, 2011

It Rains On The Street Comments

Rating: 5.0

It rains on the street,
Like a god weeping slow
Tears on the hapless
People below.
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Patti Masterman
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Smoky Hoss 20 March 2011

Your melodic metaphors dropp perfectly into place, giving hint to a melancholic depth of mystery. Love this poem.

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