Monday, December 31, 2007

It Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the sky, the clouds gathered,
and earth exhaled.
And like a tree in the autumn winds my heart swayed.
I trembled at the darkness that fell
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konye ori
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linzi- kidd 06 March 2008

...i dont know what to say... this is a spectacular poem...

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Carolyn Sears 12 January 2008

Hello Konye ori, This is an excellent write, you truly have the talented to carry you far.. I love the rain so poetry, writes on rain it always catches my eye.. God Bless! ! !

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Andrew Blakemore 09 January 2008

Excellent work Konye, you are a very talented poet.10!

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Craig Steiger 31 December 2007

very poignant, a poem that goes somewhere deep in the soul CS

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