Monday, December 1, 2008
It Rained On Me Comments
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The rain fell today, for once..
It drizzled, trinkled at first, hence
The clouds bore heavily, heaving
...and the torrent waters poured
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Max Robertson
05 December 2008
i like the rhyming idea to this poem njiri, you show quite a bit off potential. keep it up and try to develop your technique when you can Phillip xx
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7/23/2025 11:20:40 AM # 1.0.0
Well done.That is a nice piece of work.Please, keep on writing that we will learn from you as well.Bye. Edward Kofi Louis.