It rained last night
Heavily in Tucson
The Rillito was in spate
Her gait was muddy
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Marvellous depiction with excellent phraseology. A beautiful poem I like most. The favourite lines are ....No matter whatever Those who carry Beauty in their hearts Will triumph forever. Many thanks dear Nair sir, may God bring you happiness and beauty. .....10
i saw beauty in the words. beauty in the rain, beauty the rain brought with it. i saw catalina mount and Hanuman too and if i was one of those in that plane that flew high, i would have had the same imagery too. but my pen would not have flowed so well as did yours. You brought the nature alive and added a new meaning to it too. I just loved it. and the comment on NASA - how true. Like in Victorian paintings Holding her gown rushing How sad we look at NASA images of Mars Conjecture impossibilities! I loved it and loved it... today is my lucky day. read two poems (another author) twice... thank you
Truly, those who carry beauty in their hearts will triumph forever As John Keats says, a thing of beauty is a joy forever A lovely romantic poem on nature
The Rillito was in spate Her gait was muddy Like a temptress Who had a nightlong orgy Looking at the image given below I can imagine the ferocity of the rain and how the Rillito river ran in spate! An awesome write!
An absolutely amazing poem becoming at one with mother nature describing in detail the poetic feelings with great analogies. The entire poem is flashing like a picture while reading and pondering. This is another great work of Madathil - thank you so much for sharing your insights!
An absolutely beautiful, profound and well written piece. Madathil. I hope you enjoy the rest of your stay here and have a safe trip home.
Immense thanks, Mr. Kurt. The rains have elevated our spirits.
It rains heavily causing floods or it does not rain at all. Or it rains heavily in one place and it is drought elsewhere. You captured the heavy rains turning the river into turbid waters beautifully. Flowing full without a breach will be fine.