It Ok 2 Cry When U Have Good Friends Comments

good poem, good to have good friends who we can turn to in time of need, ever if it`s just a shoulder: 0)

you write very original..straight from life...no change... cutely written...very appreciable..keep writing

this was a great message of importance brought to u by.......robin serdynski (:

oh quite passionate feelings needing graces of friends, inspirational too, well crafted but with little grammatical jumble, keep it up...., thanks for sharing

I like this poem too im glad oyure my best friend robin ^_^

Love it! im so proud of you: D anyways and all u other people who commented on this girl is one of my real friends so thank you 4 encouraging her. love u flippers -hugs-

Great ideas, it's a wonderful poem with a lot of potential. Try separating the lines instead of running the lines across the entire page, look at some other poems and you'll see what I mean. And pay attention to your grammar, capitalize the beginning of sentences and use full words. Those things will make your poems look more professional and easier to read. Keep it up you're doing good!

Good friends are one of the best gifts in the world. Thanks for sharing my friend.

Not bad for a first it shows potential I'll be awaiting further work from u

This poem if very interesting. I love the way you dictated everything to friends. It has a good meaning.

Really a nice dedication to friends...hey you wrote it really well. Best wishes for your journey ahead :)