Wednesday, November 16, 2005

It Might Be You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I thought it might be you
Who'd erase all my pain....
But instead of clearing my mind,
You've driven me insane.
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Jeunese Rona
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Brian Griffin 11 June 2006

I say that this is your best work so far. Great flow, to the point... I loved the way the words rolled off my tongue as I read your poem out loud. Sad to say, but sometimes, the one we love is the one who lets us down the most. Hang in there.

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