It May Heal Comments
You were close but far
Like sky with stars
Makes me no sad
But heart feels it bad
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Aaron Mensah13 minutes ago I like the rhyming sequence
I like the idea. Danielle Timek14 minutes ago I understand what you're trying to say, and you present it with elegance, but maybe you should try to find a more steady rhythm. Don't get me wrong, it's great as is. Just trying to get some constructive criticism in! :) Comment +1 humm
Jane Lomas14 minutes ago its ok but I don't know lacks a certain wham about it in other words needs work
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great work sir himanshu singla13 minutes ago i loved it Comment +1 Touching love poem