Thursday, January 23, 2014

It Matters Not Comments

Rating: 5.0

It matters not how moves the world
Since you have gone away
For turning, as it turning does,
Turns not my night to day.
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Valerie Dohren
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Thomas Vaughan Jones 12 February 2014

Dat by day, month by month, year by tear, the world turns and the pain slowly eases. But your poem says it all Val.

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Joseph Anderson 07 February 2014

May time heal your wounded heart and sweet memories fill their place. You write of it with a greatly touching sincerity. Your work is simplistic and of rare beauty. Please continue

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Terry M 05 February 2014

I have an idea of what you feel, but each relationship has it's own special times, I wish you a thousand smiles.

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Valsa George 03 February 2014

Hope this mood of yours is transitory! Let it give way to one of resignation, acceptance and slowly one of cheerfulness! Powerful Expression of poignant feelings! !

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Richard Jarboe 31 January 2014

It might not matter, but don't take it personal. If nothing matters don't let it bring you down. Take care, ric

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Anthony Burkett 26 January 2014

Your pen causes me to feel a loss... and my loss is for words that will adequately describe the beauty and deep emotion you express in your writing... touché dear poet

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Kanav Justa 26 January 2014

your poems are beautiful... great stuff, , , , ,

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Dave Walker 24 January 2014

A beautiful poem about loss and how it makes us feel.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 January 2014

It matters not how moves the world If I can’t hold your hand. Powerful words to express inner feelings.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 January 2014

Your words are forever beautiful.

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Hans Vr 23 January 2014

Val, this is so touching, so beautiful and serene, so poetic, so full of emotion and so moving. The feeling of loss is so normal. Sometimes society wants us to be happy all the time, but it is good to live through all our feelings. Let our feelings come, live through them, and I am sure that writing poetry like this one is helping you living through the feelings. I could really connect to this poem.

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Sandra Feldman 23 January 2014

Yes, nothing really matters after that, I know. I have no words to tell you how incomparably and delicately you expressed your most inner feelings. I could hardly write after reading this. A sad pearl, like a tear drop, always to be remembered. S.

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