Tuesday, September 9, 2008

It Lays In Her Eyes Comments

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It lay’s in her eyes,
That misty longing for more.
It sparkles in her eyes,
That feeling I hold and adore.
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Aaron Priestly
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Krystal Alley 07 February 2010

very nice. keep writing

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Absent Wryta 09 September 2008

This is a beautiful poem. I like the construction and the flow. Lovely

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