i set myself a challenge
to write about the first thing i saw
when i opened my eyes....
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Rachael, brilliant composition here. My writing always takes on a life of its own. I never know the outcome until the pencil slips from my fingers and says that's it, no more. Lovely poem with a easy to read flow. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David
Good stuff, Rachael... I often feel the same way when I write. Very well done! ! Brian
And I'm glad you did, it would seem that you too have a great sense of humour, fun to be around kind of a girl Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan x
Real magic. You'd swear at times that this poem is talking about itself! ! Very clever and entertaining Rachael. xx jim
Oh yes, I can relate to this - starting off thinking I'm headed one way and find myself somewhere else... what a great subject for a poem - a great articulation of that amazing journey that we who try to write often embark upon! Thanks, Rachael Bob