Saturday, January 10, 2009

It Is Your Smile… Comments

Rating: 4.7

Woman, let me demystify you,
So I can see why I love you
So much.
Let me search:
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It is a woman that makes man complete. And vice versa. The "Ardhanareeswara" concept in Hinduism…

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Congratulations, Dear Poet. This very interesting poem is selected as one of the Best Poems of Members.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 October 2020

Curves, preserves Gardens and the reserves. Beautiful, highly romantic

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Cowboy Ron Williams 02 July 2020

Very nice love poem. Captivating. I have five poems, but they are not activated yet. Why does it take so long for a new poet? Some of them were posted three days ago!

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 March 2020

It is your smile That drives me crazy; It is your smile That makes me feel so good. Oh! My soul..../// beautiful love is expressed here// excellent

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2019

It is your smile That drives me crazy; It is your smile That makes me feel so good. Oh! My soul Is engaged in a chaotic feud; infatuation and the so called love and its experiences. tony

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Precious Scott 23 September 2018

LOVE the style of this poem. Make a great valentine card. Wow!

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Powerfully penned and pregnant with poetic passion. Well done my friend!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2018

His descriptive ability allow the reader to glimpse of the emotions presented.Such a poetic skill. Smile brings magic. It intensifies our feelings specially when the smile comes from a loved.one. Great piece..10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2018

A lovely and sweet poem masterly crafted. Very heartwarming. All the lines of the poem are well written and executed. The verse of the poet pulls the reader to go through.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 March 2018

A fabulous poem dear poet! Appreciated the lucidity of expression! Thanks for sharing....10

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Spiro Ujewe-zaz 18 August 2017

Oh yes, at the touch of love, every man becomes a poet. Lovely poem

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Rajnish Manga 10 August 2017

This is indeed an exquisite expression of a lover's passion towards the woman he is deeply in love with. Enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks a lot. It is your smile / That makes me feel so good. Oh! My soul / Is engaged in a chaotic feud;

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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2017

Beautiful and insightful poem. Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely portrayal of the enigmatic lure of a lady's smile powerfully penned with conviction. Absolutely brilliant! Kudos Hebert, and thanks for sharing.

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Bursting with a beauty that is both rich and refreshing. Well done my friend!

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 September 2015

Let me examine you from head to toes: Touch your nose, Cover your cheeks, I wonder if you are the divine doll That I dreamt of the other night. it is so true my dear Poet how we all crave for a smile full of love with a light shining in the eyes. well portrayed desire.. thank you

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2015

Yes, a woman's smile more pink than that of a rose and it's more precious than gold and diamond. What a beautiful poem.

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Marama Kelly 22 September 2009

Thank you for the invite to read your work. I apologise for the long delay in replying to your email. I enjoyed reading your thoughts, view and concept and the love you have for that special someone in your life. You have expressed well your desires, your heart, your love and it is beautiful. Thank you for the invite. Many blessings to you

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Samah Elhawy 21 September 2009

wow really its an amazing words

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

‘Why every second That you flash in my memory, The chemical formula changes in my body….’ Unalloyed emotion! Nice and great Sir. Ten Ms. Nivedita UK

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