Saturday, July 25, 2009

It Is Your Life Comments

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The life i gave you is yours
I gave it to you with no remorse.
Cherish it because it's a gift
don't let it pass you to swift
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Milica Franchi De Luri
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 24 June 2010

Thus Spake Mom ~ The life i gave you is yours./Don't remind me of that /i don't want it back ‘… Bottomline of poetry Ma’am…deep and profound… thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Catrina Heart 29 July 2009

The life i gave you is yours, but some of your activities I do not endorse. I know, youth is magic and bliss, but sometimes, you don't see the forest from the trees. That's way mother is hire to protect you from yourself my dear fabulous thoughful piece to share...you have unearthen the essense of a mother to her children...Thanks! ! ! ! ! ! 10/10

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Patrick A. Martin 28 July 2009

Nice piece Milica youth is wasted on the young someone once said but if were not all once young we would have no fond memories or life experiences to draw on.

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