Friday, May 21, 2010

It Is Too Late To Save Me... Comments

Rating: 5.0

i cant fight my inner demons anymore
a battle is talking place within me, its a bloody war
i am losing, and i am being replaced
this thing thats here is such a waste
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Megan Dickson 22 May 2010

i love this, this poem is exactly how i feel right now and it just puts it into words.u r very talented

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Crystal Bradley 22 May 2010

Very nice work. I would appreciate it if you could check out mine and let me know what you think.

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Erick Puma 22 May 2010

wow that poem was incredible. so ur changing thats good let everyone kno that your different. check out my poem 'the secret'

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Yoni Assis 21 May 2010

Deep, though I'll add that it's never too late to 'save' oneself. But that's how we feel when we're younger, isn't it?

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Unnamed Human 21 May 2010

this peom is amazing i will be putting up sad peoms as well...keep writing you have great talent.

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Elli Unknown 21 May 2010

This is a very deep poem...the dark side of human nature at work

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A powerful poem well penned. Thanks for sharing.

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