Tuesday, May 26, 2009

It Is So Hard To Be Alone Comments

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It is so very hard to be alone; from dawn to dusk
From dusk to dawn, alone, alone alone.
From a chant to a rant to a highpaying job
To an apartment in St Germain des Pres
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Rani Turton
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Jaideep Garg 03 September 2009

a joy full poem mam.... mixture of reality and some smile....... It is so easy to die alone. Copyright: Rani Turton were the best lines mam....

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Gordon Wilkinson 09 June 2009

In truth we strive, achieve and lose as we all die alone, just part of exsistence - 10

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Rani, this has moved me to tears. The creative repetition of certain words(I now realize) work so well. The reality of a high flying apartment is not what it is cracked up to be. Excellent! 10 Karin Anderson

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Kale Beaudry 27 May 2009

Wow. All I can say. Some very original, impacting lines that I loved. Particularly 'It is very hard to be a go in the wheel/It is very hard to be a cog without a wheel.' My solution: don't be a cog. Find the middle ground. Awesome.

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