Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, November 19, 2013

It Is Signal Comments

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It is signal
For fortune’s arrival
And strict reminder too
Live noble and prove true
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Slithey We chop wood, carry water. There is beauty in simplicity.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Brilliant Faheem Jawaid22 minutes ago Pearls of wisdom. Amazing write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Very good! Michael Fernandez3 minutes ago I enjoyed this very much! Very nice piece! Comment +1 Tweak is in a few areas.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Corey SmithLess than a minute ago It's a bit hard to follow because there are lots of pronouns being thrown around. There's a deep sting of truth that resonates with impact, but its flow is choppy in certain places Comment +1 Just a bit scattered

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

William ChapmanLess than a minute ago I understand the message, but the wording is just a little scattered. If the words were rearranged differently I would give this a two thumbs up! Comment +1 liked it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

FRANTZ SIMEON4 minutes ago Good read

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

It is signal For fortune’s arrival

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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