Wednesday, December 12, 2007

It Is Shocking Comments

Rating: 5.0

Friction and static made my touch hot
From my finger tip a jolt of electricity shot
In a moment I disabled an electronic track
Volume on the TV made a thunderous attack
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Broken Peaces 12 December 2007

Very good Theresa EASY READING AT ITS BEST voted regards Chris

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Thad Wilk 12 December 2007

No static here, an electric and high voltage poem, a 220 volt jolt! *10*! ! Nice going Theresa!

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JoAnn McGrath 12 December 2007

I always knew you were ' ELECTRIFYING ' T.......lol

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rajagopal haran 12 December 2007

Humor is reason gone mad....this is humour with a reason...great write Theresa

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I was expecting a sermon on world piece. Instead I got a good laugh and boy can I relate to this one...... :) t x

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Wennie C 12 December 2007

Very funny poem in deed. Keep up your humour.

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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