Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, September 22, 2013

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It is my personal belonging
From childhood I was longing
To have fresh and old collection of books
Keep in nice cupboard and keep as stock
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2013

Good. Megan Mckinney16 minutes ago Nice write. Comment +1 books

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2013

Nancy Fillip14 minutes ago Very different and interesting Comment +1 It's good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2013

Enid Oubre13 minutes ago I stumbled a few times when reading because of the grammar, but it was good. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago so many write about grammer. but no one suggests where it is wrong., kindly state and suggest so i can think upon. i take help of words dictionary too. i find nothing... wrong you may be feeling odd because of new approach from my side

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2013

Ultra Violet We have the moon but the sun needs love too... i love your heart in this poem..you have been good with your words.. You're reaching out for better. ^-^

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2013

Some Girl Very nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2013

It is my personal belonging From childhood I was longing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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