Sunday, October 21, 2012

It Is Over Comments

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I give up...
No more shall I desire
The company of companionship
No more shall I pine for the lost ones
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Rick Elpers
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Hazel Durham 24 October 2012

So well put your feelings about love, that more often than not, can go so wrong, but i think once we have love in our heart, its as natural as night follows day, we will fall in love again and again. There is such raw honesty in this poem, that i can relate to from my own experience in my own life, you have put it into words so beautifully!

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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2012

There is so much honesty in this write, that is what makes it so powerful... you are lucky that you have your beliefs as a comfort, paganism can leave me feeling pretty dratted sometimes (no idea where on earth that word came from) i dont think ive ever used it before....thanks karen

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