It Is Only You That I Want. Comments
It is only you, I want, more than your peace and rest.
More than parched lands seek the din and clamor of a burst of cloud, with no show of mercy.
Even if you blaze like a storm, dark clouds of age -long desire seek their due in exchange,
Like a dogged crane not faltering in its direction, veer in gusts of wind to find my bearing,
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Like the autumn leaves paving the doorway to our hearts. Brilliant line, as are the two beautiful closing lines of this magnificent write. Simply wonderful poem.
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7/27/2025 1:53:45 AM # 1.0.0
It's a beautiful love poem. I loved the deep emotions you portrayed with appropriate words. I loved your propensity to submission, to love and to your lover. 'If you roar and thunder and hold me captive with your concerns, To you I shall cling like a child in terror.' - So wonderfully said! ' Come let me repay your silent forbearance with my signature of submission Till it echoes with joy from star to star and releases the music Sealed by the lips of the moon in a wordless world of silence.' - Absolutely breath taking! Well done! 10/10 from me.