It Is Not The Words I Say... Comments

i liked this one.. 'for the sake of propriety'-quite Stifling.. n hey thanx 4 ur comment on my poem “I am Built that Way”.. regards Asma..

Yes, this is what one regrets in days to come... thoughts left unsaid. Very well-written and something to think about. A job well done. : -)

I totally relate to it. But that's what poetry is for, writing down the words that have been bothering you for suuuuuuch a long time. Regards, Julia

Speachless William..I am blown away. I love this beyond words only because it colors my mind so well..who can describe periwinkle in a word? I dig your passion :)

more truth spoken by a truthfull poet.10!

Open up.. you have alot to give.. your words let them flow from your mind they just might find the right heart. Good poem.

It's always difficult to make the right choices but If we're not just out to blame everyone else then I think thats a great opening line.Lots of feeling in this one.Thankyou Love Duncan

I like your poem. So much that I would like to offer a suggestion..and, please forgive me, I'm going to revise your poem. That's how much I love it...to convince you to do it my way. LOLOLOLOL...just kidding. 'it is not the words i say that bother me... but rather the words left unspoken not said implusively. that side of me died for the sake of propriety! i could probably never express these words now so open....' Just a thought. SEE! Every time there's a great poem done..everyone thinks they could do it better... L

such quandary to be in. words unspoken. love unknown. i feel the gnawing ache. what's left for a lover to say?