it is like the rain
which send down from the sky
wealth are adornment of the life
children are souvenir of the love
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you have used my three key words. LIFE, LOVE, FAITH A DOUBLE TEN
It was lovely to see the rainbow at the end of your poem Ahmad. I have heard 'to see the rainbow sometimes we need to see the rain'! You have written a beautiful tribute including love, faith, and hope and 'children are a souvenir of love' really touched my heart. Top marks Karin Anderson
'Children are souvenir of the love, ' how true it is what you say.
Beautifully worded Ahmad - - this befits the tribute meant.....10 from Fay
Every word has a good meaning. I like positive poems!
wow i enjoy it very much very beautiful kept up tht fanastic job 10+