Wednesday, November 18, 2009

It Is Killing... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Something which has been occurred in my head
What I think about, every night in my bed
Either happiness or sadness created
Which let my life glide
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Luwi Habte
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 November 2009

Well the person concerned in his ‘in-built’ antenna can get your signal next the coveted help will come…nice poem Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite you read my poems with comments and….please watch out new posts niv

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Emma Adamyan 24 November 2009

very deep and beautiful Luwi, but what a tittle though, i think it should have been sth as exiting as the poem,10

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Eyan Desir 23 November 2009

Well romantic Luwi...Good write

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John Knight 19 November 2009

Hi Angel - This is straight form the heart even though verse one is about the head! You are in a dillema so so in love and yet there seems to be a barrier? 'happiness or sadness - not beside (me) - I can't take care'. Verse Two 'How can I handle this situation? ' 'The more he talk the more I fall' 'He's taking my energy - AM DYING BY THIS UNEXPECTED LOVE' This sounds serious Luwi 'Who can help - Who can tell him? '. Only you can do that Angel - There is a gap - but LOVE can bridge it - you have given him all your heart - if he knows - that should be sufficient. We will pray for you and support you Luwi - we all love you and we don't want you to be hurt. Let us know what is happening - you are too young and too beautiful for all this angst! This is a very personal and powerful poem - thanks for sharing it merits a TEN. Love you in Poetry - PAPA JOHN.

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