Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, March 2, 2013

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You are weather woman
But I am strong wind man
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 March 2013

Lorraine Currelley and Jane Lynahan Karklin like this. Lorraine Currelley There is always gentleness, compassion, passion, love and a sweet innocence in many of your poems. Thank you, for sharing! 4 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 March 2013

Narendra Rai likes this. Narendra Rai First starting lines found with a jolt and jumped, quite imagery beautiful metaphor used: You are weather woman But I am strong wind man Blow you always with breeze and air Always with you and very near====== 3 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 March 2013

Some Girl Yes, true love should end in marriage, nice poem and I like the tone of the expression, honest. I agree that open minded relationships are incomplete, can lead to uncertainty and destruction Alyssa Womack11 minutes ago I think I like your poetry, but I have a hard time understanding what you're saying. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago flow with contents.. poetry all about sentiments and little intention of grasping +1: ( Nick Adegwe-Oshomah5 minutes ago Quite nice Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 March 2013

it is incomplete You are weather woman But I am strong wind man

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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