I look back and wonder
What a family name I hear?
It sounds good and I feel honored
How much they might have struggled and labored?
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nice Rebecca W24 minutes ago a bit confusing in places, but overall good words Comment 0
Unsual topic john kropfLess than a minute ago Great topic explored through the use of names and language. Brings the reader along to connect with the family history. The poem could be strengthened by developing the ship analogy.