Saturday, June 11, 2016

It Is Dark Outside And Violence Is Awake Comments

Rating: 4.7

I sit there in the lowveld fire
I watch the flames eat at the wood
The stories around me are repeated
One very comment gets me
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Sarah Mkhonza
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Siddartha Montik 13 December 2016

Sure a pain of experience in foreign land! expressed it in such honesty the lines speak and give the imagery as perfect! Wish that these lines and message reaches wide and far to end that Domestic Violence.. Now God I can't forgive you!

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 July 2016

Wife beaters, , the sufferings of a woman, nobody interferes......... her silent tears, her murmurings to her. her prayers to God go unheard until she dies in his brutality........... so many terrible stories we hear almost daily. nobody does anything for such women........ it is the curse of our societies and governments........... police should interfere and take such men who beat their wives and give them mental care or put them in jail.......... thank you very much dear poetess for bringing in such points to the light of the reader. tha nk you. tony

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