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As the birth of soul brings joy
The death can be made to enjoy
When desires are met
And cool welcome awaits the fate
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Gail Desautels Western world is so busy preparing, and trying to *stave it off* that they never live, and do not know how to. Idiots... 1 hr · Unlike · 1
welcome Devender Kaur, Rohani Daud 3 secs · Unlike · 1
cute Straight Crayy9 hours ago Really good Comment +1
Summary Liam Clancy9 hours ago I really like this Poem. I would try to simplify it a little bit though. I think you have a great message, but there seem to be a few unnecessary lines in there that detract from the overall poem. (I'm being critical cause I really do enjoy this poem and want it to get better. Im not critical of really bad poems cause there is no use.)
As the birth of soul brings joy The death can be made to enjoy
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welcome hitesh bhagat n mericel remirez 3 secs · Unlike · 1