Thursday, May 29, 2008

***it Is But Natural+++; Comments

Rating: 2.9

it is but natural
as some one so dear and near
as when away from home unrequitted
quest still persists by the remembrance
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Dr subhendu kar
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Bharati Nayak 08 November 2015

The pains and sufferings one goes through when some one so dear and near as when away from home not answering, the darkness, the fear that seem to overpower., expressed in beautiful lines.

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Emancipation Planz 11 June 2008

Dr Subhendu kar... it is TALL but natural.... that this is hallmarked by the flowing uniqueness of only your pen... aroha

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I am mesmerized with the beauty of the whole write - its style, language, enigmatic and deep meaning...

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Sadiqullah Khan 30 May 2008

the last line, , is it love or fear? ? ...

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Abha Sharma 29 May 2008

lightening within may flints into eyes tears glean in the pool of pupil deep thoughtful lines, I always wonder about these great images which you pen so impressively... Abha

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Mark Crane 29 May 2008

I found your poem captivating, Nice one Doc :)

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