Tuesday, April 21, 2020

It Is A Beutiefull Spring Day Comments

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The sky is blue, and the sun is shining
But the world awaits to the sad report
Death and sorrow surround each country
The plagues of all plague have us in its gripe
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Mai Murphy Venn
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Bri Edwards 14 September 2020

" But the world awaits to the sad report" could you mean " awakes to" or " awaits the" ? ? I like that you use " mother nature" , not God. I THINK you are careless in your typing and proofreading in several places. i shall explain if you ask me, giving me the name of this poem to assist me. Generally, i like the poem. bri :)

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