Wednesday, June 16, 2010

It Hurts Comments

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It hurts not to talk
It kills to walk
Away from happiness
And your smile
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Akshay Srinivasan
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Roseann Shawiak 17 August 2015

Love can bring such happiness and joy, yet when having to leave it the pain can be excruciating. Our hearts broken like a vase, shards of glass cutting our minds and hearts. Emotions rising and falling, doubt and uncertainty filling us within, not knowing how to handle what we're going through. Great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Catrina Heart 01 July 2010

You have written well the pain of love that cuts and bruised most...nice eloquent poem shared! thanks...

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Chitra - 24 June 2010

your poem talks about the most difficult emotion to handle very sensitive and heartfelt

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