Friday, February 17, 2006

It Hit Me About 5min Ago Comments

Rating: 5.0

walking along.
meandering, really.
head full of deep thoughts, barely
looking at
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Jackson Riley
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Amberlee Carter 02 March 2006

i love the pace of this piece, as well as the use of language..Even though I seen where this poem was going, I enjoyed every second of getting to the destination...well done! Always, Amberlee

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***** ********* 17 February 2006

Great poem, you are becoming one of my favourite writers Jack. Enjoyed your buzz. 10 from flutter by Tai

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Rusty Daily 17 February 2006

Always enjoy a suprise ending. Well written and clever. Rusty

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