walking along.
meandering, really.
head full of deep thoughts, barely
looking at
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Great poem, you are becoming one of my favourite writers Jack. Enjoyed your buzz. 10 from flutter by Tai
Always enjoy a suprise ending. Well written and clever. Rusty
i love the pace of this piece, as well as the use of language..Even though I seen where this poem was going, I enjoyed every second of getting to the destination...well done! Always, Amberlee