It Happens.? . Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

It Happens.? .

Rating: 4.7


Sometimes things go wrong
With uneven paths of trudging


Changing the expression less faces
With golden heart of smiling


Some clouds near and some far away
With a silver lining

In crystal clear lively expressions
With Emotions like fear and love of sharing

Longing to feel the overwhelming thoughts
With a platinum of real souls nearing


Disturbing the turbulent mind
With billions of stars glittering

Simple the words but speaks in grandeur
The essence of dutiful real feeling

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Real feeling in dutiful words.....It happens
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 18 July 2016

...Should not feel low when things go wrong in life. Positive drop. Liked it....

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Happy to read your comments after a long gap, your poems are simply superb, thanks for the review, dear poet

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Dev Anand 18 July 2016

Longing to feel the overwhelming thoughts With a platinum of real souls nearing......... beautiful expressions of romance. love it.

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Great to read ur comments and quoting from the poem, thanks a d welcome dear poet

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 July 2016

Realistic! ! Sometimes things go wrong in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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I am befitting example of it mostly it goes.........wrong, thanks Yes it happens but has to move on, that is life, welcome dear

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