Sometimes things go wrong
With uneven paths of trudging
Changing the expression less faces
With golden heart of smiling
Some clouds near and some far away
With a silver lining
In crystal clear lively expressions
With Emotions like fear and love of sharing
Longing to feel the overwhelming thoughts
With a platinum of real souls nearing
Disturbing the turbulent mind
With billions of stars glittering
Simple the words but speaks in grandeur
The essence of dutiful real feeling
Longing to feel the overwhelming thoughts With a platinum of real souls nearing......... beautiful expressions of romance. love it.
Great to read ur comments and quoting from the poem, thanks a d welcome dear poet
Realistic! ! Sometimes things go wrong in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I am befitting example of it mostly it goes.........wrong, thanks Yes it happens but has to move on, that is life, welcome dear
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
...Should not feel low when things go wrong in life. Positive drop. Liked it....
Happy to read your comments after a long gap, your poems are simply superb, thanks for the review, dear poet