Thursday, August 8, 2013

It Happened One Night.. Comments

Rating: 3.5

When the world was warm in bed,
The moon kept raising its head.
Awake I stared at the sky
and waited till night was ripe.
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Jaya Varma
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Savita Tyagi 02 December 2013

A lovely poem. Your soul's journey took the reader along. Thanks for sharing.

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Ramesh Rai 13 October 2013

loved your write. keep writin

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Lyn Paul 09 August 2013

A great description of words, particularlyMy fingers could read the walls Thank you Jaya

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Jaya Varma 08 August 2013

Thank You all for the warm and encouraging welcome..your appreciation is all that matters :) thanks again..

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Payal Parande 08 August 2013

wonderful and full of imaginary the words crafted beautifully...a beautiful piece and welcome to ph hope you like it here

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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

It seems to be your first poem in this forum. I welcome you to PH and wish to see many more poems here in the days ahead. This poem took us along your nocturnal journey.. Well described.

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