Monday, October 29, 2018

It Had To Be Done Comments

Rating: 5.0

We were afraid
of getting caught
in the distance the train
to Grantham, here
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Zyw Zywa
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John Beaton 27 November 2018

The title and last line cohere, and the last two lines present first love as an unavoidable rite of passage. The third stanza speaks volumes about expectation of mutual care, and lack thereof. A touching poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 November 2018

I felt my fingers in the warmth of his hair and inside, the unknown he was doing, it happened quite quite fine presentation of the first love........ thank u dear poet. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 October 2018

Amazing poem, dear. I wish u both all the luck and happiness of the happy part. A poem full of dare and brilliance. Thank u for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 29 October 2018

Well thought-out and nicely brought forth from the heart. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Zywa.

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Dave Walker 29 October 2018

A great poem, I'm still with my first true love.

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