On a blue canvas,
few patches of black and grey.
thats how
the sky is looking today.
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I for one loved it dear Jenie, I'm not one of the best poets on this site but I enjoyed it. keep writing. Siya_! !
nice poem but i didnt like it at all as its approach is so contamparaly and out of link
hi dear... i read your poem, i think it was direct and this is not good for a poem...and decrease the authority of your poem. try to write when you are really have a real feeling about that thing, , , because you should not lie to yourself, especially in poet! be successful.............
This is a lovely poem, short and sweet. I think the shorter poems are the best.
Well I like it. Sometimes a poem might be direct. Even if the poem is not your best write it any way. I love to read. Their your feelings. If just keep writing you'll better or worse. That's just life. A nice poem.