It Felt Like Poem by Lilian Wanjira

It Felt Like

Rating: 4.0


When i met you,
It felt like.. i knew you,
It felt like.. life is all new,
Even after letting me know,
Of your dark past, i knew,
I could change and mend it a new,
With you, my dark days were few,
Ah! ! It felt like..like...dew!

We made it together,
Rising each other,
As the days went further,
Up until signals came my way,
Trying so much not to sway,
It felt like i was placed as hay,
Waiting for the great and big day,
It felt like..like..am being betrayed!

You all along knew,
That our days were few,
Giving up what we had,
And making your heart hard,
Leaving me with scars,
Scars that i would treat alone,
Alone with my crying heart,
Broken heart..painful tears..
You could have told me..
But...
It really felt like..
I was lost...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 12 July 2011

this is a sad ink with lot of pain and hurt.can feel your heart.very nice.

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Saadat Tahir 08 July 2011

When i met you, It felt like.. i knew you, It felt like.. life is all new, Even after letting me know, Of your dark past, i knew, I could change and mend it anew, some of yer rhymes work very well and this is the best... well done :) sat

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