Tuesday, June 6, 2017

It Feels Like Love To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

You shield me from the pouring rain
You hug away my pain
You touch your finger to my nose,
And make me smile again.
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Carl Roussell 13 November 2018

Actions do speak louder than words, and you have expressed the feeling of love well in this poem. I hear a gentle behind your words, kind of like Ed Sheeran's 'Photograph'.

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Practicing Poetess 14 November 2018

What a sweet and lovely comment! (It's been said that women SPEAK love, while men SHOW it, being more action-oriented.) Thanks for reading, Carl! : -)

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Michael Walker 17 June 2017

The refrain, ' It feels like love to me' is so right for the context. A well-structured poem with effective repetition of 'You'.

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Thank-you, Michael! Getting a comment from you is always a great compliment! Happy Father's Day to all the men on site- - Either you are a father, or you had one...! :)

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Rebecca Navarre 09 June 2017

Oh How Beautifully Wonderful! ! ! ! ! Like The Way It's Composed! ! ! ! ! Brings Many Smiles And A Chuckle At The Poems Notes! ! ! ! ! Excellently Done! ! ! ! ! So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Thanks, Rebecca! Glad I could bring a smile to your face! Hope you are well.

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Barry Middleton 07 June 2017

Well written. And I like your note about the poem. Most of the recent poems I write on love are composites.

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Barry, this is SO ENCOURAGING to hear from you! It just confirms that Great minds think alike! We poets have an amazing gift of being able to combine just the right mix of life experience and fantasy, in order to obtain the final result of truly great poetry. This is so much fun! And writing actually improves with practice. Hope you are enjoying a wonderful day where you are.

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Dear poet, I appreciate your rightness for which you mentioned in your poet's notes. we Indians and tamilians insisting chasity (a girl live with one person in his whole life) . so here male chavanism and men are hypocrites. your poem about your love and relationship to men are very frankly manner that I admired. expecting more from you.

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