Saturday, April 12, 2008

It Feels Like A Pause Comments

Rating: 3.5

It feels like a pause

As my life waits for the past to catch up
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Anita Atina
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David Harris 29 April 2008

Anita, another wonderful outing here. The hope that we all carry with us well represented here. Top marks and thanks for sharing this beautiful poem my friend. David

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David Champion 14 April 2008

The pause...the present moment we need to live in and need to respond to if we are to be fully alive...

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Alison Cassidy 13 April 2008

This is a superb blend of spiritual truth-seeking and personal angst. Waiting for ' The present to fully engage/To inner truths that our souls know/But our mind doesn’t recognise fully' is brilliant - as is the clear structure and language of this fine poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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