Friday, September 16, 2016

It Creates A Story In Me... Comments

Rating: 5.0

With your satiny hairs,
You amble without a normal foot.
But with a pristine look,
Your big eyes shines luminously.
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Randhir kaur
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Dr. Antony Theodore 24 December 2020

But with a pristine look, Your big eyes shines luminously. Dear, Maybe people call you a handicap, I call those bullocks a madcap. paving the way for the self realizaiton. a very good poem. tony

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Rohit goel 10 January 2017

very nice

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Siddartha Montik 03 January 2017

Wonderful lines of a Praise and applaud! I envy him/Her!

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Randhir Kaur 31 December 2016

I cannot explain my ecstasy Sir. My respect and smiles to you from Jorhat, Assam, India.

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Siddartha Montik 03 January 2017

My Pleasure Dear Kaur! !

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Siddartha Montik 19 December 2016

Wuenderbar (wonderful so wonderful) muss (must) ich (I) sagen (Say) ! und schoene Dank! (and very many thanks) ! ! ! 10+++ So are you a beauty! ! ! Thank you! !

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Randhir Kaur 19 December 2016

Thank you for your lovely words Sir. I had to ask Google what you meant in German and I was pleased to know its meaning. Thank you very much Sir. Top of the world. So much peace I had received. Your every feedback is infulencing.

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Siddartha Montik 16 December 2016

of past aber wrote so vivid in clarity.. Wuenderbar muss ich sagen! und schoene Dank! ! 10+++! !

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Chan Mongol 12 November 2016

Wow! I am so impressed! What a thought! I adore the poet for her such a greatly constructed poem. Her humbleness, respect, attention and love towards a neglected one in the poem is very praise worthy. It is an example and inspiration for others. You did a noble work, poet. I am giving all the way up to 10 for this masterpiece. Thank you for sharing.

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Randhir Kaur 29 October 2016

Thank you Mr.Mantu for the kind feedback. Glad to hear such words.

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Mantu Mahakul 29 October 2016

With pristine look big eyes shine luminously. Very wisely penned this poem is really. Interesting sharing again.10

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Randhir Kaur 24 September 2016

Thank you Rajnish Sir for your valuable analysis. I am glad that you liked it. Respect and hearty wishes. Keep inking.

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Rajnish Manga 24 September 2016

The poem presents a candid commentary on our skewed perception about people who have some kind of physical disability. Though, of late, there has been some change in the attitude of individuals and our society- as reflected in the poem- much still needs to be done. Thanks for taking up a bold topic. Thank you, Randhir ji. Dear, Maybe people call you a handicap, I call those bullocks a madcap. Interestingly, what, I am a handicap mentally, here I reveal.

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Randhir Kaur 21 September 2016

Ever many thank you Khalid Sir and Christopher for the feedback. Means a lot..Yea, you are right Tye. I don't wanna address her as disabled or handicap because she is a beautiful person at heart though I don't know her but have a feeling that she is a nice soul. My deep respect to this lady(Monica) Hugs n wishes.

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Christopher Tye 21 September 2016

Wonderful poem, sometimes disabilities and handicaps are more about how people perceive you rather than want you can achieve.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 21 September 2016

Wonderfully done Randhir. Well done., keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Randhir Kaur 21 September 2016

Thank you such much dear Sir.I am blessed by your words. Wishes n respect.

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Gajanan Mishra 20 September 2016

create history my dear daughter Randhir Kaur, I wish you all good.

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Randhir Kaur 19 September 2016

So true Sir. You really meant what I partly wanted to convey. It gives you an opportunity to offer friendship and spread love... May ur word leaves an impression on every single unmatured mind. Thank you Kishore Sir for your touching feedback. Stay tuned.

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Kishore Kumar Das 19 September 2016

It creates not only a story in you.....but with meaningful repercussions...physical disability is no longer a trauma today...it gives you an opportunity to offer friendship and spread love.....it can also inspire you to achieve a lot and be aware of your unlimited possibilities...

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Randhir Kaur 16 September 2016

Thank you dear Edward and Elena for the kind review. Your appreciation means a lot to me. Peace as well as pleasure to hear such words. So right of you Elena Sandu that a person can really can change your perspective, whether you are familiar with the person or not.

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